Hyper-personalised lines

Improve your positive response rate with hyper-personalised lines.

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Hyper-personalised lines allow you to prove that you're already invested in learning more about the person you're messaging - it's one of the best ways to improve your positive response rate and create an engaging dialogue between you and a person. 
 

Here are 11 examples of hyper-personalised opening lines, with profiles for reference:

 
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Hey {{FIRST_NAME}},

Your previous experience looks really interesting - I'd love to know what it was like going from a Development role at Amazon to CTO at Solar CRM, was it a big change for you?

 

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Hey {{FIRST_NAME}},I saw your two most recent roles have been in finance - we're a finance product looking to hire someone just like you for our Senior Data Science Manager role.

 

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Hey {{FIRST_NAME}},What did you get up to during your year in industry at Queen Mary - were there skills you picked up that transferred over to your current role?

 

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Hey {{FIRST_NAME}},You've got a real range of experience, from your Psychology degree to being a co-founder, how much do each of those roles inform how you work in your current role at Unmind?

 

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Hey {{FIRST_NAME}}, I spotted that you listed you're interested in react but it's not one of your primary skills, is it something that you'd like to work more within your next role?

 

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Hey {{FIRST_NAME}},

I'm impressed that you've progressed from Junior Web Dev to Front End Dev but can see you're now at the level to take the next step up. I saw you're interested in React and Typescript.. that's our core stack.

 

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Hi {{FIRST_NAME}},

Impressed by your 2 years at Conversion and saw you were looking for fully remote positions. We're a fully distributed company 😊

 

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{{FIRST_NAME}},

Your interest in React, Node.js and JavaScript aligns perfectly with our stack - I think you'll like what we're doing here.

 

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Hi {{FIRST_NAME}},

Your Master in AI and your experience as a Technical Lead at intelygenz could make you the perfect fit for our Lead Engineer position. We're working with Python and Machine Learning too 🙂

 

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{{FIRST NAME}},

Just saw your experience for the last year at Codehort. Looks super interesting. Were you working with TDD there? Saw you were interested in it and we're focusing our Engineering team on developing TDD practices atm...

 

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Hey {{FIRST_NAME}},

3 years at Meganexus as a technical lead could make you a perfect fit for our Lead Developer position. We're looking for someone who knows Java inside-out, but likes the DevOps elements of technical leadership. Would this suit you?

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